Dragons Den Pitch feedback

Each group gave a two minute pitch about our idea for a music video and song choice to the class. For feedback most people said they liked the idea of the girl dancing in the boxing ring because it's different and unusual concept. Having this for the full song length would be too repetitive so the idea of bringing in another element with more of a story is a good idea. They suggested something which linked more with the song, because I hadn't decided on song they said this idea needed a lot of development. Now I'm going to focus on this second element with more story and filming at the boxing ring so I can start editing that footage.

Existing Student Music Video

This video features numerous different editing skills and camera shots throughout the video, the wide range is something I want to echo in my video, however I found the lack of obvious narrative frustrating as it lacked meaning. By following the one character through the video is easily to follow through the simplistic idea which was executed well through the smooth editing skills.

Actors

This is Ruth, Freddie and Chris. I asked these to film because I wanted it to look like a young family and I was positive they would be willing to help out. I am hoping that their connection to each other will come through on camera. This is John and Harry they are brothers and have kindly agreed to be in the music video. As with the family I want there connection as brothers to come through in the footage. There's is a big age gap in there and I would like the influence of the older brother to be obvious when I film, so he comes across as a role model. Josie acted as Becky Hill the featured singer on the song. The setting was a recording studio were Josie lip synced the song, with the recording microphone and stand I managed to get as a prop.

Evaluation Question 3

What have you learnt from your audience feedback?

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